Over a week ago in this blog, I posted For a Dad.
Today I thought of two more sentences to add
to that poem (I like its flow).
The extended version of it can be found below:
For Father’s Day (third Sunday of June),
a “Happy Father’s Day” message is on a balloon
(hovering aloft). Helium: what it’s got.
It’s not to be popped
cuz it’s going to Pop.
The balloon got inflated
(to rise and float).
I hope this delights
(like a dad joke)…
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Here’s the link to the poem when it was shorter:
For Father’s Day (third Sunday of June),
I’m not sure which version is better (latter or former?)